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A story...

Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 12:19 pm
by Paralus
The slightly less abridged version...

The dead lay everywhere. The ground onto which they had been driven was littered with their corpses. Shattered sarissae, viscera and body parts shared the killing ground with the whole weapons and armour that had been abandoned in the rout. The foetid odours of blood and bowel fouled the increasingly frigid air as the cries of the dying and the wounded faded with the Iranian mid-winter sun set. Litter bearers carried the still living from the blood soaked dust into which they had fallen and carts, the produce of carnage piled high inside, plied their way to funerary bonfires yet to be lit. Morale in the camp matched the freezing night air as confusion, tinged with anger at the day's proceedings, spread with the smoke from the campfires.

As the lamps were lit the self-proclaimed “strategos of Asia”, having surveyed the killing field, called a meeting of his hetairoi. The military prospects for the morrow were not propitious: his phalanx and, more importantly, his Macedonians were shattered. A resumption of hostilities in the morning would be difficult, if not impossible. The strategos still had a card in play though and the situation was far from decided.

The day ... had started in more promising fashion. The "strategos of Asia" had marched south in battle order across the eight kilometres of cold and dry salt plain that, still now, separated him from the recent ally who'd renounced his feality for what was clearly personal gain... His 22,000 heavy infantry, which – depending on its depth – stretched in excess of two kilometres (1.25 miles), included some 7,000 or so Macedonian phalangites, almost all recent drafts from the homeland. An equal number of epigoni, “successor infantry” armed and trained in the Macedonian fashion of phalanx fighting, adjoined them and mercenaries, Lycians and Pamphylians filled out his line. The remainder of the cavalry was posted on the left wing under the command of Peithon. The entire array would be screened by some 65 elephants and many thousands of light infantry and skirmishers...

Re: A story...

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 8:05 am
by Fiona
More, please!
Fiona

Re: A story...

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 8:27 am
by rocktupac
...This defeat at Issus would go down in history. Persia, despite her disadvantages in infantry, would teach this young man from Macedonia a lesson. Although he was no first-class warrior, the King of Kings had history on his side. Cyrus had lent the third Darius, though not directly, his wisdom and patience. A subtle weakness had been exploited. Rashness had been exposed during the melee. But it was the arrogance of a young king, and not the superiority of a near-eastern monarch, which cost so many lives. Ambition and excitement are powerful, and distract the present...

Re: A story...

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 11:09 am
by Paralus
Right nationality, wrong "King of Asia".

Re: A story...

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:39 pm
by amyntoros
Ooh, ooh! (Raises hand and jumps up and down in seat.) I know. I know. Pick me, pick meeee!

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I'm not allowed to say, right? :lol:

Re: A story...

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 9:09 pm
by Paralus
(Notices raised hand and points) Yes Amyntoros?

Re: A story...

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 9:17 pm
by athenas owl
Is he really tall and fat? :?

Re: A story...

Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 10:19 pm
by marcus
amyntoros wrote:Ooh, ooh! (Raises hand and jumps up and down in seat.) I know. I know. Pick me, pick meeee!

... ... ...

I'm not allowed to say, right? :lol:
Well, I seem to have about 5 possibilities going round in my head, but I'm darned if I know which one Paralus means.

Any more clues, Paralus (or Amyntoros, as you seem to know, you old clever-clogs)?

ATB

Re: A story...

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 8:22 am
by Paralus
RIght then: that should give it away.

Re: A story...

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 7:54 pm
by marcus
Paralus wrote:RIght then: that should give it away.
Eh?

Re: A story...

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 8:44 pm
by Paralus
marcus wrote:
Paralus wrote:RIght then: that should give it away.
Eh?
Err, re-read the original post. It has been ... updated.

Re: A story...

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:42 pm
by marcus
Paralus wrote:
marcus wrote:
Paralus wrote:RIght then: that should give it away.
Eh?
Err, re-read the original post. It has been ... updated.
Aahh! That makes more sense. I hadn't realised that you'd updated your original.

Still not entirely sure, to be honest, but I think I know - not so good on my Diadochoi.

ATB

Re: A story...

Posted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:45 pm
by Paralus
Go on... have a stab.

Re: A story...

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 2:59 pm
by agesilaos
Since my favourite diadoch encompassed this ones fall and death I could never see eye to eye with him, not only that it would only take this fellow half as long to get blind drunk as my man.

Re: A story...

Posted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 4:45 pm
by athenas owl
athenas owl wrote:Is he really tall and fat? :?
And a bit hard of seeing? :wink: